writing style? Basically, I just want a few opinions on whether or not I have a decent plot/story/characters/etc going on.
Yes, I know Y!A isn't the best place for literary advice, but I still want opinions from all different people.
And yes, the first few paragraphs/chapters are fast paced and...
The Echo Troopers
It seemed to be a normal morning for Gary, who had just been woken up at 6:45 by his alarm clock. The house was quiet, as it was every weekday, as his parents both left for work at 5:00 a.m., and Gary was an only child. He got up, brushed his teeth, washed his face, and...