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    Constructive Criticism for Travel Photography?

    I have been a professional photographer for about 3 years now for the last 3 years I have sold my work in a few galleries around the US and I make many, many sales every month to people internationally. This last month I have had only about 15 sales. Could you please take a look at my work and...
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    Is it constructive or destructive to use formal language around people?

    I tried to add somebody to my facebook and he accepted my friend request and then asked me, "do I know you?" And I said, "My name is XXXXXX from the XXXXX XXXX. I hope I don't offend you but I try to avoid adding people that I am too close to or in regular contact with to my facebook account...
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    Constructive criticism on the opener of my sci-fi story so far (re-post)?

    “Markolo, your hair is bright purple.” I looked up from my breakfast cereal at my mum. She was staring at me. “What?” I asked, sure that I’d misheard her. “Your hair is purple,” she repeated, stifling a laugh as I launched myself from my chair at the table and started running upstairs to find...
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    Constructive criticism on the start of my sci-fi opener so far?

    “Markolo, your hair is bright purple.” I looked up from my breakfast cereal at my mum. She was staring at me. “What?” I asked, sure that I’d misheard her. “Your hair is purple,” she repeated, stifling a laugh as I launched myself from my chair at the table and started running upstairs to find...
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    On not making college basketball team any constructive advice on this?

    Feel real bad right now. I just turned 23 years old and said **** it I'll try out for my community college basketball team well in tryouts they were only going to select 2-3 people tops. They already had 13 on the team that were recruited was what happened. The tryouts was mostly a lot of...
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    • advice basketball college constructive making team
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    • Forum: Sports Club
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    Constructive Criticism? Please and thanks. :)?

    Okay here's the story. Let me know if you would want to read more. :) http://www.wattpad.com/mystories?compose=true&id=979744
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    Constructive Criticism? Please and thanks. :)?

    Okay here's the story. Let me know if you would want to read more. :) http://www.wattpad.com/mystories?compose=true&id=979744
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    B&A: Looking for some constructive feedback on this story excerpt?

    I posted this a couple days ago but I'm reposting (sorry) because I want some different oppinions and especially some constructive criticism. The main character, Zira, has just woken up from a severe head injury and a gunshot wound to the leg. She doesn't remember anything and has no idea where...
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    How can I improve this novel??? Points goes to best constructive crit.?

    Here is Chapter 2 http://www.booksie.com/romance/novel/aishaelizabeth/nightwood-saga:-fangs-1/chapter/2 Here are some questions.... 1. Would you buy Nightwood Saga: Fangs if I released it as a real book? 2. Do you think that the book is too short? Should I add some new scenes? And if so...
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    Can you take a look at my incomplete story and give constructive criticism?

    Crow coughed out their sorrowful tune to create a world of misery and disarray. An olive colored tree is where it happens. Blood stain still mark the spot where I lay and my soul will be lost for all eternity. I float, dangling in the air, and hope that someone can hear my story. I recall...
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    • constructive criticism give incomplete story
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    • Forum: Books & Comics
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    Would like a few more raters please with constructive criticism?

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ArqxSGuicd0.qMtx3_ZCvkfty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100703123550AAA4wOj
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    Constructive v. Destructive Criticism.

    How do you build up a movement with destructive criticism?... Yeah, that's what I thought. But that doesn't stop the makers of sites like You're Not Helping from going flat-out negative, even when they're offering "praise." Read the beginning of what looks like a series of posts on how to be...
    • Geek
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    • constructive criticism destructive
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    • Forum: Science News
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    Looking for constructive criticism on the beginning of my short story?

    I'm working on a short story right now and I'm in need of opinions. Thanks in advance :) Among humanity, the light of day tends to temporarily relinquish nightmares to the back of your mind. I, however, had no such luck. Instead of sunshine and clarity, I awoke to an interminable darkness, both...
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    Do you think that if you have nothing constructive to say or lack a sense of

    humour then you should not bother? To answer a question
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    10 points for constructive criticism of my writing?

    20 November 1719 – Evening On the opposite side of the war, they were sat in a tremendously decorated drawing room lined with frescoes and carpeted in fine rugs. They were sipping their wines and looking into the fire crackling in the fireplace, passing comments between them. All except one...
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    Do you like this? If not, please give constructive criticism :)?

    The dreamer The purpose of life ever-changing, “To be or not to be”- not decided, The light of day superbly blazing, The cool of the night tantalizing. “Who am I?” we asks, “The meaning of life?”, The merits of pain, Or the pleasures of vice. One day the paint is light, And then light...
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