get offended? My eyes opened.
I hadn’t moved from the place I’d fallen last night. That meant that I was still in this maze. Alone. I couldn’t remember the last time I’d been alone. I always had some kind of comrade, or acquaintance, or girl…
My mind felt as if it had split into about five...
I'm writing a critique paper on 2 cigarettes, and I plan to structure my body - (1) information on cigarette 1 (2) information on cigarette 2 (3) comparison between the two.
I need some ideas on what sort of information can be given for the first two paragraphs.
Mind that I want to compare...
here is the beginning of my story, The Summer Sun:
“Ahhh. . .” I sighed as I lay back against the soft, warm summer grass next to my best friend Taylor.
“This is the life, eh?” Tay asked me.
Definitely, I thought, shifting the cold soda can in my hand. I wished every day of summer went like...
http://www.critters.org/whathow.html
The article basically says don't be harsh when stating your point. The best part of the whole article is:
I know, it's easy to write something like this (which is the beginning of an actual critique):
Use a spell-checker! NOTHING detracts so much from a...