Okay, so i am writing a story and this is like the 3rd time ive tried writing the beginning and i think it is the best version.... plz tell me your opinion so that i can improve it....
~Introduction~
It started out as a regular night. Jenny took shower, put on her favorite pajamas, brushed...
sugar dumpling pumkin pie
dont you even cry
ill be hear to lend a hand
ill have a tissue to dry your tears
ill bury you in the land
ill keep a box under your bed with all your fears.
oh gorgeous, why are you red
is it time for you to go to bed?
shall i set up the snakes and carving knives
set...