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    Can you Edit my introduction/ thesis for my essay if you can.?

    “Vimy Ridge was a nation building experience, because the Canadians made an incredible four day victory by taking over Vimy Ridge, and also Vimy Ridge was Canada’s greatest World War 1 victory. Secondly “the great war was also Canada’s war of independence”, because of the of Canada’s...
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    Opinions on this introduction/ first chapter to my story?

    It's basically about all the medications I have tried or have been on. I will probably work a plot into it somehow but this is only the first chapter. So tell me what you think and any grammar errors I missed. Drug Memoirs 1.Pills Popping twenty four Dramamines will make you stumble...
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