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    How is this first section of the first chapter of my Book? i know...there are LOTS

    of mistakes...? The darkness overtook us; flashes of thunder shook the ground that we stood on. The wind was violent as it threw dust and debris at our skin. The Ezrian star had disappeared in the darkness and all that was visible was the remains of our home. The thunder shouted like evil and...
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