prolouge

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    Is this a good Prolouge?

    Ok, I was wondering if this Prolouge is good? Btw the characters are foxes with human postures. I wanted to add biographies but not much space D: ok they lost there parents, kk Ok here's the Prolouge Pandora's Box Prologue - A Heavy Heart Tagger stood shaking on the crumbling cliff-side...
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    Is this a poor prolouge?

    the bits it ' ' are in italics... What do you think? it needs work as i only just whipped it up, any suggestions? ‘Ammolite is a small country on the west of Whales. Its multi cultural residents are very unique. The country does not have a particular race, its city’s towns and villages are...
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