PROLOGUE:
I’m an outcast.
That’s all what I have to say about myself, that I am a freak, a lone wolf and an fugitive in the judging eyes of general society and a teenager being bullied because of his heritage and habits.
This is what I had to say about myself two years ago, this was my identity...
The piece is a bit too long to post in question format, so here's the link:
http://www.writingforums.org/blog.php?b=2689
Any thoughts, comments, suggestions, critiques or general impressions would be IMMENSELY appreciated.
And I thank you very much for taking the time to do this for me!
I had to write an essay on if curling should be considered an olympic sport. Can anyone out there please review and critique it. And help me on one if mine is extremely bad?
Here's my intro:
The crowds are cheering, the people are shouting, excitement is in the air. Then there is silence; the...