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B&A: I'm Stuck. Can Someone Really Nice Help Me Out?
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<blockquote data-quote="mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm12" data-source="post: 2406509" data-attributes="member: 827479"><p>Okay, this is kinda ridiculous. I'm completely blocked right now. I have a writer's group meeting tomorrow night and I haven't been able to start my chapter. So can you give me a hand?</p><p></p><p>What happened last time was Fenrir and his partner Lorenz (both Knights) arrested a man for mixing alchemy and magic (magic is illegal) and experimenting his creations on people that he's abducted.</p><p>The audience learned that Fenrir has some secrets pertaining to magic, but don't know what it is. It's actually that he is a shapeshifter which is thought to be not only magical, but the unholy union of human and demon.</p><p></p><p>That is where I am currently stuck. He hasn't returned to the castle to turn in the prisoner to the Emperor. He's just on his way there...</p><p></p><p>What comes next is Fenrir talks to the Prince at Fenrir's favorite tavern, and the Prince tells him about his hatred for magic-kind, and how he wishes that humans (excluding other races like elves, fae, nymphs, ect) were the only kind in existence. Making Fenrir feel very uncomfortable.</p><p></p><p>(Note: You don't have to read the next paragraph unless you want more info)</p><p></p><p>And after that, the prisoner from before escapes and leads Fenrir to kill the Emperor, and shifting in front of the Prince who is next in line for the throne. So Fenrir will be an outlaw while the Prince hunts for him.</p><p></p><p>--------------------</p><p></p><p>So basically, I know where I need to end up for the chapter, but I have no idea how to start it off. I could have Fenrir turn in the prisoner, but that would be particularly boring. I've also been thinking that Fenrir has been having a secret romance with the princess, but that sounds a bit cliche. </p><p></p><p>I really don't know how to start! Any ideas? Please help?</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm12, post: 2406509, member: 827479"] Okay, this is kinda ridiculous. I'm completely blocked right now. I have a writer's group meeting tomorrow night and I haven't been able to start my chapter. So can you give me a hand? What happened last time was Fenrir and his partner Lorenz (both Knights) arrested a man for mixing alchemy and magic (magic is illegal) and experimenting his creations on people that he's abducted. The audience learned that Fenrir has some secrets pertaining to magic, but don't know what it is. It's actually that he is a shapeshifter which is thought to be not only magical, but the unholy union of human and demon. That is where I am currently stuck. He hasn't returned to the castle to turn in the prisoner to the Emperor. He's just on his way there... What comes next is Fenrir talks to the Prince at Fenrir's favorite tavern, and the Prince tells him about his hatred for magic-kind, and how he wishes that humans (excluding other races like elves, fae, nymphs, ect) were the only kind in existence. Making Fenrir feel very uncomfortable. (Note: You don't have to read the next paragraph unless you want more info) And after that, the prisoner from before escapes and leads Fenrir to kill the Emperor, and shifting in front of the Prince who is next in line for the throne. So Fenrir will be an outlaw while the Prince hunts for him. -------------------- So basically, I know where I need to end up for the chapter, but I have no idea how to start it off. I could have Fenrir turn in the prisoner, but that would be particularly boring. I've also been thinking that Fenrir has been having a secret romance with the princess, but that sounds a bit cliche. I really don't know how to start! Any ideas? Please help? [/QUOTE]
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