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For the past half of a century, television has been making it’s way up in the media charts and dominating the world by hand from it’s un-limiting boundaries. Most of these extents are mentioned by Antonia Peacocke, author of “Family Guy and Freud”, and as the author points out, the show, “Family Guy” provides the viewers with humor that has never been touched on before. These topics generally include Sexism and Racism that have been the cases of prejudice, but by claiming new territory, the show is what brings mockery into light. Thus, Peacocke seems to agree that "Family Guy" should be kept on air, but with so many controversies surrounding the show, it would be better to satisfy its wider range of viewers rather than to keep on feeding the bird. Therefore, unless "Family Guy" decides to improve on its distasteful content, it should be prevented from airing on television, especially to keep young children from viewing it.
For the past half of a century, television has been making it’s way up in the media charts and dominating the world by hand from it’s un-limiting boundaries. Most of these extents are mentioned by Antonia Peacocke, author of “Family Guy and Freud”, and as the author points out, the show, “Family Guy” provides the viewers with humor that has never been touched on before. These topics generally include Sexism and Racism that have been the cases of prejudice, but by claiming new territory, the show is what brings mockery into light. Thus, Peacocke seems to agree that "Family Guy" should be kept on air, but with so many controversies surrounding the show, it would be better to satisfy its wider range of viewers rather than to keep on feeding the bird. Therefore, unless "Family Guy" decides to improve on its distasteful content, it should be prevented from airing on television, especially to keep young children from viewing it.