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Message: <blockquote data-quote="student" data-source="post: 2014014" data-attributes="member: 218371">school tomorrow.? I feel that my introduction paragraph is just bad. I really need someone to fix it for me. I know it's not your homework but I really need the help. I have to turn this in tomorrow for my first period class.Poverty is more than a situation, it's a state of mind. Children living in poverty are at great risk of malnutrition, poor education, violence and criminal activity. Researches have found that children who live with low income families live very unhealthy lives than children with wealthy families. Children that live in poverty are also more likely to become less successful in school. In addition poverty undoubtedly motivates children to join gangs and become criminals at a very young age.</blockquote>