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my introduction? I will be describing and explaining recent demographic changes in the UK. Demographic means the study of changes in the size and structure of the population. Demographic changes in the UK refer to the changes in birth rates, death rates, emigration, immigration, infant mortality. I am going to, say what birth-rates, death rates, emigration and immigration and infant mortality, describe what the change has been, when it occurred, and why it occurred. Describe what have been the demographic and explain why they have been executed. I will be given statists, facts and figures to demonstrate how for example medical care haw improved.
 
Use the following instead:

Second sentence:

Demographics is the study of changes in the size and structure of the population.

Third sentence:

The demographic changes we are looking at in the UK include the changes in birth rates, death rates, emigration, immigration, and infant mortality.

Next sentence:

I will present the birth rates, death rates, rates of emigration and immigration, and and rates of infant mortality, and will state how they have changed, over what periods of time the changes have taken place, and why they occurred.

Omit the next sentence. ("Describe what have been the demographic and explain why they have been executed.")

The last sentence:

Statistics, facts and figures will be used to highlight changes; for example, the improvement of medical care.
 
I will be describing and explaining about the recent demographic changes in the UK. Demographic is defined as the study of changes in the size and structure of the population. Demographic changes in the UK includes changes in birth rates, death rates, emigration, immigration, infant mortality. I am going to analysis something from the birth-rates, death rates, emigration and immigration and infant mortality. For instance, the changes, when it occurred, and why it occurred. I will be given statists, facts and figures to demonstrate how for example medical care haw improved.

I omitted 1 or 2 sentences since it isn't so important, i think.
 
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