shaanibabem
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I want all the things you think about it. I'm 13 and i want to know how I'm doing.
My teacher says i have a talent when I'm in the mood. But i can't exactly get anything right
. So just give me criticism and tell me what you think 
I was going to school. Leaving my mother for 6 months and if I don't get kicked out then it's a miracle. I always got kicked out of schools. Now matter how hard I tried I always got thrown out. Because I'm a menace and something that is giving all the children bad ideas. Of course I have my own special name.
Mrs. Bad Influence.
Yes people call me that, pathetic isn't it? Just because I was a little rebel that got away with almost nothing.
Even if someone else set a school on fire. Mention my name and bingo! I'm the one who done it.
I waved out the window as my mother stood outside. Waving towards me. I smiled and then blew her a kiss, she caught it and gobbled it down.
Yeah I'm 13 but who cares? I can be a little immature when I want to be. No one bothers me and no one talks to me. Just behind my back.
“Hi.” I heard a timid voice say, I could almost hear her heart beating.
“Er... Hi..” I said awkwardly. Yeah, I had no friends and didn't know how to socialize. So what? I'm fine with how I am.
I looked up and into the girls eye's and bingo, she was acting her timidness. How I knew? Her face was scrunched up.
Pretty hard not to miss.
“I'm Rhea, Rhea Crown.” she said in a small voice, which of course was trembling. I didn't know how this girl knew how to act so good but she was looking pretty convincing.
“Nice.” I said simply, she nodded and then waited expectantly.
Oh right.
“You can sit if you like.” I said to her and she smiled. No relief at all, just kindness. Gosh this is so awkward. Not being talked to for how long..? And now this girl comes along and doesn't care. She is oh-so obviously new in town.
“Look. I am the one who gets in all the trouble around here. Point your little finger at me when you do something wrong and I get the blame. So if you hang out with me you will get a lot, I mean a lot of hate fans.” I said to her, my voice firm in warning. Of course she didn't care. All she done was shrug.
“So. I don't care..?” she said it as a question, but I knew she didn't care. Weird girl.
“All right, don't go running to them for forgiveness. They won't give it.” I said, shrugging plainly. Which again, she didn't do anything but shrug too.
“What's your name again? I don't think I caught it.” she said to me, her eyebrows crunching in concentration.
“Oh god no. I didn't tell you. No one knows my name. I'm Mrs. Bad Influence. Call me Bi.” I said and she cocked a brow, I shrugged as her answer and put my iPod headphones in my ears. Turning on the music I put my head back and rested, feeling relaxed.
But of course, like everything.
It was short lived.
Near the end it says ******, it's meant to be Raised. but i used he other word and now it looked like a swear word.
Sooo. it is raised a brow,
My teacher says i have a talent when I'm in the mood. But i can't exactly get anything right
. So just give me criticism and tell me what you think I was going to school. Leaving my mother for 6 months and if I don't get kicked out then it's a miracle. I always got kicked out of schools. Now matter how hard I tried I always got thrown out. Because I'm a menace and something that is giving all the children bad ideas. Of course I have my own special name.
Mrs. Bad Influence.
Yes people call me that, pathetic isn't it? Just because I was a little rebel that got away with almost nothing.
Even if someone else set a school on fire. Mention my name and bingo! I'm the one who done it.
I waved out the window as my mother stood outside. Waving towards me. I smiled and then blew her a kiss, she caught it and gobbled it down.
Yeah I'm 13 but who cares? I can be a little immature when I want to be. No one bothers me and no one talks to me. Just behind my back.
“Hi.” I heard a timid voice say, I could almost hear her heart beating.
“Er... Hi..” I said awkwardly. Yeah, I had no friends and didn't know how to socialize. So what? I'm fine with how I am.
I looked up and into the girls eye's and bingo, she was acting her timidness. How I knew? Her face was scrunched up.
Pretty hard not to miss.
“I'm Rhea, Rhea Crown.” she said in a small voice, which of course was trembling. I didn't know how this girl knew how to act so good but she was looking pretty convincing.
“Nice.” I said simply, she nodded and then waited expectantly.
Oh right.
“You can sit if you like.” I said to her and she smiled. No relief at all, just kindness. Gosh this is so awkward. Not being talked to for how long..? And now this girl comes along and doesn't care. She is oh-so obviously new in town.
“Look. I am the one who gets in all the trouble around here. Point your little finger at me when you do something wrong and I get the blame. So if you hang out with me you will get a lot, I mean a lot of hate fans.” I said to her, my voice firm in warning. Of course she didn't care. All she done was shrug.
“So. I don't care..?” she said it as a question, but I knew she didn't care. Weird girl.
“All right, don't go running to them for forgiveness. They won't give it.” I said, shrugging plainly. Which again, she didn't do anything but shrug too.
“What's your name again? I don't think I caught it.” she said to me, her eyebrows crunching in concentration.
“Oh god no. I didn't tell you. No one knows my name. I'm Mrs. Bad Influence. Call me Bi.” I said and she cocked a brow, I shrugged as her answer and put my iPod headphones in my ears. Turning on the music I put my head back and rested, feeling relaxed.
But of course, like everything.
It was short lived.
Near the end it says ******, it's meant to be Raised. but i used he other word and now it looked like a swear word.
Sooo. it is raised a brow,