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CAN YOU EDIT MY 4 SENTENCED PARAGRAPH?
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<blockquote data-quote="mHmmBemmemem" data-source="post: 2529585" data-attributes="member: 862382"><p>Can you please help me edit this:</p><p>On the field, a soccer player should always be ready. They should have the ability to perform the basic skills. They should have the strength to follow all the main expectations needed in a game . If a soccer player knows everything they need in terms of the techniques and the regulations on the field, they will surely succeed.</p><p></p><p>2 things:</p><p>1) I feel like I am repeating myself</p><p>2) This is my last paragraph in my expository writing. I don't know if it sounds good. </p><p>Please help em edit it. I worked really hard on this.</p><p>Thank you/</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="mHmmBemmemem, post: 2529585, member: 862382"] Can you please help me edit this: On the field, a soccer player should always be ready. They should have the ability to perform the basic skills. They should have the strength to follow all the main expectations needed in a game . If a soccer player knows everything they need in terms of the techniques and the regulations on the field, they will surely succeed. 2 things: 1) I feel like I am repeating myself 2) This is my last paragraph in my expository writing. I don't know if it sounds good. Please help em edit it. I worked really hard on this. Thank you/ [/QUOTE]
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