mHmmBemmemem
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- Mar 12, 2011
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Can you please help me edit this:
On the field, a soccer player should always be ready. They should have the ability to perform the basic skills. They should have the strength to follow all the main expectations needed in a game . If a soccer player knows everything they need in terms of the techniques and the regulations on the field, they will surely succeed.
2 things:
1) I feel like I am repeating myself
2) This is my last paragraph in my expository writing. I don't know if it sounds good.
Please help em edit it. I worked really hard on this.
Thank you/
On the field, a soccer player should always be ready. They should have the ability to perform the basic skills. They should have the strength to follow all the main expectations needed in a game . If a soccer player knows everything they need in terms of the techniques and the regulations on the field, they will surely succeed.
2 things:
1) I feel like I am repeating myself
2) This is my last paragraph in my expository writing. I don't know if it sounds good.
Please help em edit it. I worked really hard on this.
Thank you/