Can you comment on my anime story?
Now I would like you to comment on my anime story. This Is not a chat and is a question.
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Anime Story: Can you comment on it?
"RING, RING" Naruto Alarm goes off.
"Ah man, back to school already"! Screams Naruto
"Nary time to get dressed and eat your breakfast"! Says Vergil (Naruto's pet fox)
"Tell Grandad i'll be down in 5" Says Naruto
"Ok" Says Vergil
"Hey Vergil, can I bring my pet mouse amandaa to school today? It will make me fell better since I have no friends this year". Says Naruto sarcasticly.
"No Nary" Says Naruto's Grandad
"But why"? Says Naruto
"Dude, Its beyond your birthday we can't give you that speical of a gift" says Vergil
"Ah dang, thats worse than the Spagetti Monster coming in my room and feeding me to the rats". says Naruto
"Yeah well you can't, but Naruto as a speical back to school I will pack you a mango for lunch". Says Naruto's Grandpa.
Ok. Says Naruto
The End
Please comment on my story.
Remember I asked a question which was: Can you comment on my anime theamed story"?
Now I would like you to comment on my anime story. This Is not a chat and is a question.
I made sure and it follows the community guidelines.
Anime Story: Can you comment on it?
"RING, RING" Naruto Alarm goes off.
"Ah man, back to school already"! Screams Naruto
"Nary time to get dressed and eat your breakfast"! Says Vergil (Naruto's pet fox)
"Tell Grandad i'll be down in 5" Says Naruto
"Ok" Says Vergil
"Hey Vergil, can I bring my pet mouse amandaa to school today? It will make me fell better since I have no friends this year". Says Naruto sarcasticly.
"No Nary" Says Naruto's Grandad
"But why"? Says Naruto
"Dude, Its beyond your birthday we can't give you that speical of a gift" says Vergil
"Ah dang, thats worse than the Spagetti Monster coming in my room and feeding me to the rats". says Naruto
"Yeah well you can't, but Naruto as a speical back to school I will pack you a mango for lunch". Says Naruto's Grandpa.
Ok. Says Naruto
The End
Please comment on my story.
Remember I asked a question which was: Can you comment on my anime theamed story"?