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Message: <blockquote data-quote="MaxwellIngram" data-source="post: 2519693" data-attributes="member: 860134">The story is interesting because I feel like there are a-lot of people who can relate to it. However, the way you structure your sentences is just kind of un-appealing.  Keep writing and you will work the kinks out.  It sounds good so far, but I would like to see where you are going from here. Pleaaseeee read my short story. It's only a chapter so far. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>