Do You Like This Song I Wrote?

mRidiculous~Angelm

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Title: Regretting Yesterday

(verse 1) Somewhere she sits now, listening, a girl without a dream.
The things she craves are never enough to satisfy her.
Maybe the world is just as frightening as it seems.
But for now we'll just pretend it's not, because we're liars.

(chorus) Whispering lies through our hardened smiles.
We cry out to the strong with open hands.
We push down the memories of sorrow and bile
because we know they'll never understand.

We search for the day when someone will pay
all of us the dues we've long deserved.
While our regrets from yesterday
Begin to haunt us more and more.

(verse 2) Someday we’ll find out why we’re so hard to please,
Why we compete to be the best at essentially nothing
Maybe I’m the one complaining, but hey, we’re all diseased
With the curse of never ending want, of always trying and failing.

Somebody out there ought to know that there’s no way to stop the bleeding.
It keeps on spreading until the infection is everywhere!
We try and try to heal ourselves, crying, and begging and pleading
For forgiveness and second chances, and then forget that no one cares.

(chorus) Whispering lies through our hardened smiles.
We cry out to the strong with open hands.
We push down the memories of sorrow and bile
because we know they'll never understand.

We search for the day when someone will pay
all of us the dues we've long deserved.
While our regrets from yesterday
Begin to haunt us more and more.

(Bridge) And you, you know you agree
Because as much as you hate me
You cannot help but see
That I’m right, that I’ve always been right
That it’s wrong; it’ll always be wrong!

(chorus) Whispering lies through our hardened smiles.
We cry out to the strong with open hands.
We push down the memories of sorrow and bile
because we know they'll never understand.

We search for the day when someone will pay
all of us the dues we've long deserved.
While our regrets from yesterday
Begin to haunt us more and more.

(ending) At last we realize that what we should’ve done has gone away,
There’s nothing to be done except put things in the past
And hope we don’t remember yesterday.
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On a scale of 1 - 10. 10 being the best. ^_^
 
yes i really like your song! its great and i would give it a 9
you should get it published :D
 
THATS COPY RIGHT I WROTE THAT!!!!!!!!! I wrote that a while ago and have been waiting to get an agent and have it published and everything!!!!!!! COPY RIGHT
 
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