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Message: <blockquote data-quote="StephanieB" data-source="post: 2444089" data-attributes="member: 220351">I am writing the introduction paragraph for a research paper for history class. Does this seem like its off to a good start so far? While some have argued that Rome and China are unrelated, in reality, their cultures have significantly influenced each other. While China developed a new form of government, Legalism, Rome established a Republican form of government. Can someone help maybe add a few sentences to this intro or give some recommendations? Also any ideas for my conclusion of the paper???!I already wrote the body paragraphs, and yes they include information about the culture, and such.....</blockquote>