For my writing what sounds better. My first person or my third person?

Taylar1

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Im 13 and i am planning to write a book. I know im young but i want to. So i am torn between writing it in first person or third perosn. So i will post a sample story in both first and third person (these are not part of my book though!)

First person:
I lay in bed, listening to the soothing sounds of the soft rain hitting to roof of my house. It's calming. As i listen to the rain, a wave of fatigue hits me. As i close my eyes to sleep, my annoying alarm clock goes off.
"Ugh.... Another sleepless night." I groaned as i rolled out of bed.

Third person:

Darcy lay in bed, listening to the soft patter of the rain against the roof of her house. As a wave of fatigue hit her, she slowly closed her eyes, as if to sleep. As she was ready to fall asleep, her annoying alarm clock went off
"Ugh... Another sleepless night." she groaned while she rolled out of bed.
 
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