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<blockquote data-quote="barbie" data-source="post: 1552345" data-attributes="member: 254376">This is my letter of complaint.&nbsp; Is this correct for the full block style buisness letter? If not what do I need to change?Danny Bennett&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 204PoindexterStreet&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Dallas, Texas 75201&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; October 26, 2008The Rock Star Hotel Office Rock207 Rock Star Lane&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Arlington, Texas 76001DearManager&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; My name is Danny Bennett I stayed at your hotel for one week in the month of October. Unfortunately my experience turned out to be a nightmare.&nbsp; I will clarify each of the problems below.Firstly, housekeeping only comes once a week. I hung a do not disturb sign outside on the doorknob. They ignored it and came barging in without knocking.&nbsp; I had to put a chair in front of the door to prevent further unwanted disturbance.Secondly, I ran out of all bathroom necessities, including toilet paper. I am very cautious about my hygiene. It was unnecessary to walk to the office and ask for these necessities.Finally, I would like to add that I specifically asked for a room upstairs. The staff gave me downstairs. All I heard when I was trying to get some rest was stomping from above. There was no shower curtain in the bathtub, so every time when I took a shower water was spilled all over the floors.Could I please ask you to look into these matters not only on my behalf but also on behalf of other customers, and in fact on behalf of your hotel, too?I would not like for your hotel to go out of business because of these problems. I look forward to hearing from you.Sincerely,Danny Bennett&nbsp; dannybennett@yahoo.com</blockquote>

[QUOTE="barbie, post: 1552345, member: 254376"] This is my letter of complaint. Is this correct for the full block style buisness letter? If not what do I need to change? Danny Bennett 204PoindexterStreet Dallas, Texas 75201 October 26, 2008 The Rock Star Hotel Office Rock 207 Rock Star Lane Arlington, Texas 76001 DearManager My name is Danny Bennett I stayed at your hotel for one week in the month of October. Unfortunately my experience turned out to be a nightmare. I will clarify each of the problems below. Firstly, housekeeping only comes once a week. I hung a do not disturb sign outside on the doorknob. They ignored it and came barging in without knocking. I had to put a chair in front of the door to prevent further unwanted disturbance. Secondly, I ran out of all bathroom necessities, including toilet paper. I am very cautious about my hygiene. It was unnecessary to walk to the office and ask for these necessities. Finally, I would like to add that I specifically asked for a room upstairs. The staff gave me downstairs. All I heard when I was trying to get some rest was stomping from above. There was no shower curtain in the bathtub, so every time when I took a shower water was spilled all over the floors. Could I please ask you to look into these matters not only on my behalf but also on behalf of other customers, and in fact on behalf of your hotel, too? I would not like for your hotel to go out of business because of these problems. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Danny Bennett dannybennett@yahoo.com [/QUOTE]

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