I accidentally deleted the old post on yahoo. While i was trying to edit my words sorry. I had read some of the feedback not all. Furthermore, I had forgotten to add the update on the bottom i posted to the site. I'm 14 years old, and yes i really am if you don't believe me fine. I wrote this article about the ground zero mosque that i would like ask for some feedback on. Please read the whole article before you comment thx =) and sry for posting the question again it was my fault the first one was deleted, and before you say it i know there might be grammatical errors i haven't fixed yet.
http://numeroten.com/numeroten.com/Writers_Blog/Entries/2010/8/4_Mosque_Near_Ground_Zero.html
Please give feedback that is based on fact not opinion.
http://numeroten.com/numeroten.com/Writers_Blog/Entries/2010/8/4_Mosque_Near_Ground_Zero.html
Please give feedback that is based on fact not opinion.