The plot is below! This is basically a re-post, since I came up with names for the characters, by the way; sorry, but I only have 4 answers on that question so far....xD!
- Dream bracelet found in attic.
- Girl finds it.
- She can see into others dreams and how they really feel.
- She passes out whenever she uses it and ends up in the hospital the first time.
- Her Doctor steals it and she sees it on his wrist.
- The girl tries to get it back but he won't admit to stealing it, saying that it is his own. She knows that he is lying and tries to beat him up to take it.
- Her best friend (who is a guy,) who is there with her pulls her back.
- The Doctor smiles and then leaves with her family and her friend to go back home.
- During her dream her eyes open and she begins to shake, uncontrollably doing something she never wanted to do. She takes a knife and presses it against her throat, until her Step-Brother finds her and takes it away from her.
- She kills her Step-Brother.
- She realizes that the Doctor made her do it, controlling her. She never realized that it could posses so much power.
- Within a few minutes, she begins to shake once again, her eyes wide open. With no control, once again, she writes a suicide note and places it next to her Step-Brother, making it look like she never did anything.
- Her and her (guy,) best friend go to the Doctor after she tells him about how she killed her Step-Brother, but not on purpose.
- He cleverly implies that with the dream bracelet he has found out that he could do anything he wants to do, and control the most powerful people in the world, not to mention control people in coma's to wake up, thus increasing his job performance, hopefully getting him promoted to a heart surgeon, and if he can kill all the most powerful people in the world, people will come to the doctors to ask what is wrong, being he can get money.
- She and her best (guy,) friend try and go to his house and steal the bracelet, but since it's at night and both of them are tired, and half asleep, he controls them not to, and to leave. He smiles before they are asserted out the door.
- She and her best (guy,) friend confess feelings for each other, and the rest of the novel is basically Romance, Horror, Young Adult, Thriller, Suspense and Mystery!
1.) Would you read it?
2.) Do you have some title suggestions for my book?
3.) Anything I should add/take out of the plot?
4.) Critiques on the plot at all?
Would you read this novel judging by the plot?
- OCD.
- Dream bracelet found in attic.
- Girl finds it.
- She can see into others dreams and how they really feel.
- She passes out whenever she uses it and ends up in the hospital the first time.
- Her Doctor steals it and she sees it on his wrist.
- The girl tries to get it back but he won't admit to stealing it, saying that it is his own. She knows that he is lying and tries to beat him up to take it.
- Her best friend (who is a guy,) who is there with her pulls her back.
- The Doctor smiles and then leaves with her family and her friend to go back home.
- During her dream her eyes open and she begins to shake, uncontrollably doing something she never wanted to do. She takes a knife and presses it against her throat, until her Step-Brother finds her and takes it away from her.
- She kills her Step-Brother.
- She realizes that the Doctor made her do it, controlling her. She never realized that it could posses so much power.
- Within a few minutes, she begins to shake once again, her eyes wide open. With no control, once again, she writes a suicide note and places it next to her Step-Brother, making it look like she never did anything.
- Her and her (guy,) best friend go to the Doctor after she tells him about how she killed her Step-Brother, but not on purpose.
- He cleverly implies that with the dream bracelet he has found out that he could do anything he wants to do, and control the most powerful people in the world, not to mention control people in coma's to wake up, thus increasing his job performance, hopefully getting him promoted to a heart surgeon, and if he can kill all the most powerful people in the world, people will come to the doctors to ask what is wrong, being he can get money.
- She and her best (guy,) friend try and go to his house and steal the bracelet, but since it's at night and both of them are tired, and half asleep, he controls them not to, and to leave. He smiles before they are asserted out the door.
- She and her best (guy,) friend confess feelings for each other, and the rest of the novel is basically Romance, Horror, Young Adult, Thriller, Suspense and Mystery!
1.) Would you read it?
2.) Do you have some title suggestions for my book?
3.) Anything I should add/take out of the plot?
4.) Critiques on the plot at all?
Would you read this novel judging by the plot?
- OCD.