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<blockquote data-quote="Evie" data-source="post: 2002311" data-attributes="member: 225302">Personally I kinda hate twilight. I read it when I was about 9 or 10, but now I&#039;m 13. And before all you &#039;Twihards&#039; have a go at me for judging them when I haven&#039;t even read them, I HAVE read it!! I loved it but now I DON&#039;T! Here are my reasons:1. Bella is such a boring brainless character! She has no personality and I think the reason Edward can&#039;t read her mind is because she doesn&#039;t have one! She is such a Mary Sue! And it has a very anti feminist feel! For one, Bella can&#039;t do anything without her man! When she&#039;s left without a man, she&#039;s depressed and can&#039;t do anything, then has to get another man in her life, Jacob, to set things right! This is imposing upon young girls that you have to have a man in your life to be able to do anything, and that you cant be the hero for yourself! And that you should sacrifice your own life for a baby! Bella does say once that she wants to be the hero, and wants him to turn into a &#039;vampire&#039;, but she&#039;s flatly refused and is told that &#039;she&#039;s already saved him&#039; Cough Cough! After all these years of trying to get woman an equal status to men, and SM just undoes it all!2. It&#039;s sooooo cliche! And it just goes on and on and ON, with out hardly anything happening at all!!3. The vampires don&#039;t have fangs! Seriously, that&#039;s not right! Ok, sparkling in the sun, That&#039;s just annoying, and not drinking human blood is starting to go a bit far, but NO FANGS! Ugh! She&#039;s making out vampires to be these snuggly, warm, loving creatures, but what happened to Anne Rice!? All her vampires just die out, huh?4. It&#039;s sooooo cheesy! Seriously, Bella Swan or &#039;beautiful swan&#039;! Or in your sleep &#039;you said that you loved me&#039; or &#039;and so the lion fell in the love with the lamb&#039;! SM said herself that that was cheesy! The director of the movie wanted to take that line out and i don&#039;t blame him!5. The characters and plot are lame and under developed! OK, she comes up with great characters, like Alice, and Rosalie, and they&#039;re just pushed to the side and left to rot and she focuses on boring insecure characters instead! Bella AND Edward have absolutely NO personality at all! Like at least JK Rowling planned out all her books before she wrote them, but SM just wrote down anything she could think of! And, she didnt even write Twilight from the start! She wrote it from the meadow scene! No wonder half the plot points didn&#039;t add up! Which brings me to my next point-6. SM is a shit AS writer! She must have had a **** editor,that&#039;s all I can say, cause there&#039;s soooo many glitches and mistakes, in grammar and spelling! There&#039;s no excuse for it! Especially because she got a degree in english literature! Yeah RIGHT! And vocabulary is sooo bad! How many times does she use the same words over and over and OVER!!? Like how many times does she use the word &#039;smolder&#039; for instance! And sure, she uses lots of big fancy words, but hell, she doesn&#039;t even know what they mean! She writes big page long descriptions of people over and over! Like first, she gives us a long, vague description of all the Cullens, and then all of them get their own page-long description which just goes on and on about every little insignificant detail! But the thing is, instead of using three or four sentences without about 10 adjectives, she could give us a much cleared description with one word, if she just bothered to open a thesaurus and think, &#039;Hmmmm that word describes them perfectly!&#039; instead of going &#039;Well, that word isn&#039;t really what I&#039;m looking for, but it&#039;s big and it might even make me look intelligent!&#039; There are so many resources open to her, and it seems like she hardly even bothers!!7. It&#039;s unhealthy how girls project themselves into the role of Bella, and ten try to act like her, a stupid, clumsy, helpless little girl who need help with everything! The only thing she can do for herself is cook, clean and have babies! Talk about unhealthy.8. The only reason girls like it is because it&#039;s wish fulfillment. Bella has no character traits at all, so they cab just project them self into her spot instead and go on a magical daydream where they inexplicably manage to snag a hot BF who is actually a vampire, and who sparkles in the sun/9. The friggin &#039;fanpires&#039; or whatever they&#039;re called! I&#039;ve got this friend, and i told her that i didn&#039;t like Twilight so she pushed me over and I sprained my ******* ankle!! LIke, over reacting or WHAT? So no ones allowed to have an opinion apart from you.......and all the other &#039;fanpires&#039; of course! shit. And they can&#039;t even spell.so plz give me your opinion and excuse some of my language.luv evie&#039;A sparkling piece of shit......is still just a piece of shit.&#039;</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Evie, post: 2002311, member: 225302"] Personally I kinda hate twilight. I read it when I was about 9 or 10, but now I'm 13. And before all you 'Twihards' have a go at me for judging them when I haven't even read them, I HAVE read it!! I loved it but now I DON'T! Here are my reasons: 1. Bella is such a boring brainless character! She has no personality and I think the reason Edward can't read her mind is because she doesn't have one! She is such a Mary Sue! And it has a very anti feminist feel! For one, Bella can't do anything without her man! When she's left without a man, she's depressed and can't do anything, then has to get another man in her life, Jacob, to set things right! This is imposing upon young girls that you have to have a man in your life to be able to do anything, and that you cant be the hero for yourself! And that you should sacrifice your own life for a baby! Bella does say once that she wants to be the hero, and wants him to turn into a 'vampire', but she's flatly refused and is told that 'she's already saved him' Cough Cough! After all these years of trying to get woman an equal status to men, and SM just undoes it all! 2. It's sooooo cliche! And it just goes on and on and ON, with out hardly anything happening at all!! 3. The vampires don't have fangs! Seriously, that's not right! Ok, sparkling in the sun, That's just annoying, and not drinking human blood is starting to go a bit far, but NO FANGS! Ugh! She's making out vampires to be these snuggly, warm, loving creatures, but what happened to Anne Rice!? All her vampires just die out, huh? 4. It's sooooo cheesy! Seriously, Bella Swan or 'beautiful swan'! Or in your sleep 'you said that you loved me' or 'and so the lion fell in the love with the lamb'! SM said herself that that was cheesy! The director of the movie wanted to take that line out and i don't blame him! 5. The characters and plot are lame and under developed! OK, she comes up with great characters, like Alice, and Rosalie, and they're just pushed to the side and left to rot and she focuses on boring insecure characters instead! Bella AND Edward have absolutely NO personality at all! Like at least JK Rowling planned out all her books before she wrote them, but SM just wrote down anything she could think of! And, she didnt even write Twilight from the start! She wrote it from the meadow scene! No wonder half the plot points didn't add up! Which brings me to my next point- 6. SM is a shit AS writer! She must have had a **** editor,that's all I can say, cause there's soooo many glitches and mistakes, in grammar and spelling! There's no excuse for it! Especially because she got a degree in english literature! Yeah RIGHT! And vocabulary is sooo bad! How many times does she use the same words over and over and OVER!!? Like how many times does she use the word 'smolder' for instance! And sure, she uses lots of big fancy words, but hell, she doesn't even know what they mean! She writes big page long descriptions of people over and over! Like first, she gives us a long, vague description of all the Cullens, and then all of them get their own page-long description which just goes on and on about every little insignificant detail! But the thing is, instead of using three or four sentences without about 10 adjectives, she could give us a much cleared description with one word, if she just bothered to open a thesaurus and think, 'Hmmmm that word describes them perfectly!' instead of going 'Well, that word isn't really what I'm looking for, but it's big and it might even make me look intelligent!' There are so many resources open to her, and it seems like she hardly even bothers!! 7. It's unhealthy how girls project themselves into the role of Bella, and ten try to act like her, a stupid, clumsy, helpless little girl who need help with everything! The only thing she can do for herself is cook, clean and have babies! Talk about unhealthy. 8. The only reason girls like it is because it's wish fulfillment. Bella has no character traits at all, so they cab just project them self into her spot instead and go on a magical daydream where they inexplicably manage to snag a hot BF who is actually a vampire, and who sparkles in the sun/ 9. The friggin 'fanpires' or whatever they're called! I've got this friend, and i told her that i didn't like Twilight so she pushed me over and I sprained my ******* ankle!! LIke, over reacting or WHAT? So no ones allowed to have an opinion apart from you.......and all the other 'fanpires' of course! shit. And they can't even spell. so plz give me your opinion and excuse some of my language. luv evie 'A sparkling piece of shit...... is still just a piece of shit.' [/QUOTE]

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