How can I make my introduction better? It sounds awkward?

Anna

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When kids go to the playground, they usually enjoy playing tag or hide-and-seek with the other children there. However, this was not the case with my friends and me when we went to the park. We liked the take over the playground as though it belonged to us and nobody else.
The last sentence should read "We liked TO take over the park..."
 
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