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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Destiny" data-source="post: 2355788" data-attributes="member: 230044">How can i make my introduction paragraph better?I am writing a Fiction Inventory on a detective that finds what his heart most desires. People tell me that i should make it more engaging so far i have this... It was a cold windy night in New York City. There was the best detective in town, sitting in his dark office. He was the a mysterious man, no one knew his, his age, or any information about him. No one knew him but everyone asked him for help because yet there wasn't a problem that he couldn't solve.</blockquote>