How do I introduce my characters physical appearence?

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Canadian

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well, since she's a female, she probably (not that this is true 100% of the time in any way, shape, or form) ruminating on her appearance. for example, she could say something like "she looked down and caught a glimpse of her long, recently shaved legs striding foreword" etcetera etc... :D good luck, hope it helps!

ps just think of times when you are thinking of your apearance -- it doesn't have to be a block of text just about her, but sort of include shit along the course of your story :D
 
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CattthePointsHunter

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^ You could go that way. Or you could make them fidget, which also works every time. "I flicked my shaggy red hair out of my eyes for the hundredth time that day and tutted. It had gotten way too overgrown. I'd been meaning to book an appointment to the salon for a while" < which also shows her character!
 
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MreSpock1

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Have them looking into a mirror, and thinking about their looks. Works every time.
For example, they can be getting ready to go out for dinner, to a party, or any other event. They may even be criticizing themselves if they are upset. There are endless possibilities.
Good luck!
\//_ Mr. Spock
 
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McAwesome

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have her talking to her friend Shaniqua and then Shaniqua can say, "Damn girl you lookin' fly today! Got your highlighted hair all up in here and those big ole pouty lips. Gurl if i was a guy i'd hit that up in a second!"
You can add other sentences if needed but i got you started on your way to an awesome story.
Glad i could help.

You're Welcome,
McAwesome
 
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