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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Coal_of_the_brain_dead" data-source="post: 2749468" data-attributes="member: 918045"><p>If the story requires the dialog, use the dialog. I would suggest finishing it the way you're going now, then asking someone you trust to read it and give you an opinion. If you have to you can always go back and insert some more decritive scenes or action to space out the dialog. It is a truth in writing that an author's harshest critic will always be himself, so get another opinion before selling your work short.</p></blockquote><p></p>