How is my song that I wrote?

[Lake]

Its called Right In Front Of Me



Can’t you understand me
I’m losing all my patience
Look me in my eyes
And apologize
I’m just so hurt knowing, that you don’t understand
I’m just about to give up, and you probably won’t care

You just reject me
You do not care
You just force me
That’s the way you are
My work is getting weaker
I can’t think for myself
I’m trying to tell you, but you just can’t hear

But I’m a fighter
I know I will succeed
You will not force me
So I’m a fighter
My dream will unfold
It’s right in front of me

Everyday I’m strugglin’
Hoping you will change
It’s not gonna happen
But I won’t give up
I know one day you’ll listen
I know one day you’ll care
I know one day I’ll make it, and you’ll be there

(But right now)

You still reject me
You do not care
You just force me
That’s the way you are
My work is getting weaker
I can’t think for myself
I’m trying to tell you, but you just can’t hear

But I’m a fighter
I know I will succ

 

[LIGHTSandPARAMORE4ever]

woah. that is so good. its a bit like one i wrote i love it! put up some more songd. ur really talented!