How to edit the introduction for my essay about Persia?

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Introduction:
In the past the ancient Persian civilization was one of the most largest and influential civilizations of all time. On the other hand, Persia had created an astonishing foundation for religion, belief system, philosophies, ideologies, artistic aspects, and developments/ interactions among/within societies. From 558 B.C. to 652 A.D. Zoroastrianism was the court religion of the “Achaemenian”, “Parthian”, and “Sassanian” empires.
* I'm supposed to talk about Persia's religion, belief systems, philosophies/ideologies, artistic aspects, and developments/interactions among/within societies
--- If anyone can help make the wording sound better or help with the grammar that would be great---
--- Any help is greatly appreaciated---
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