How to write a lemon (Rated RRRRRR scene)?

[shinigami]

Although my imagination is pretty outrageous, I can imagine the scene when I read a lemon/smut/etc scene from a fanfiction vividly but not to the point where I can write one...it usually comes out as a lame piece of writing lol. Are there ay tips I could get so that I can write better ones? Thanks!

 

[mPrincessCharmm]

Keep on writing them and you should see some improvements. I recommend you read lemon fanfictions, as well.

 

[gfpd_123]

Read more similar stuff and try to modify or make your own version of the stuff you've read.

 

[RD]

Ooh, lemon scene! Sexy, smut, erotica. I get it! (At first I thought you wanted to win the 2013 Bulwer-Lytton Award.)
I could write a MILLION of these things.
Now, all sweet and sexy - Nasty b*tch and b*stard style -
'I already told you,' he said. 'You're wearing too many clothes. I'm buck naked (in bed), and I've seen people shopping wearing less clothes than you. Take off your bra and pants."
'Or else what?'
'Or else I toss the dog in here, and go and sleep with Sue. She's already offered for me to do so, and I'd bet she'd love to see me naked.'
She tried to grumble, but found she had no words.
He pressed his luck further. ‘You'll still be properly dressed for bed in your top and panties. Do as I say, and I'll be sweet to you all night long.'
'You're being a big a**hole, Sam,' she groused, as she did what she was told.
Once back in his embrace, she added 'Don't you dare try to have sex with me.'
Ooh, I'll bet!
Now, if they're all sweet and in the moment -
With obvious intention, she 'accidentally' stuck her bosom right in his face.
'Ooh,' she peeped. 'I like this!' referring to what was behind him.
'So do I,' he thought, referring to what was in his face.
He grabbed her by the waist, pressing his face further into her deep cleavage.
'Ooh!' she peeped again.
He kissed and nipped at the fleshy parts of her body that he made burst out of her thinly strapped brassiere... and blah blah blah.
Or now the smut!
As we walked naked down the hall, Amy made a quick phone call - and another apartment door opens up before us. We all just walk right in, except for Sue, who I'm still carrying on my c*ck. Amy drops our clothes on a table, while Chloe neatly lined our shoes up by the door. When she bends straight at the waist like that, I again wonder how she can even see past her giant, pendulous t*ts.
I also wonder if Sue will ever stop f*cking me. And then I see Rosie, and I feel myself harden more. She smells so good, like a lavender and rose-water bath. She looks radiant in her steel blue bikini, with her slightly over-sized front teeth peeking out from full and parted lips.
'God, I so want to f*ck her, I think, as Sue finds even greater pleasure from my manhood. She smiles and yelps and c*ms and c*ms.
'I have got to get this crazy b*tch off my c*ck if I'm ever going to get a chance to f*ck Rosie,' I firmly tell myself.
So I start to toss Sue's *ss into a nearby chair. But with both speed and grace, Sue nimbly spun around on my rod, with her perky *ss now in my face.
'Oh, you're gonna get it now,' I politely warn her.
Whew! So maybe, now, erotica?
We kiss so passionately. We both want things to last forever. I just pray to God that I can for her tonight.
She awakened me with an expert massage, all naked and slicked up with body lube. I quickly grew strong for her, as she used her entire body to release the tension from my sore and hard-worked muscles.
'It's been such a long day,' I apologize. 'I must've fallen asleep while waiting for you.'
'I know,' she sweetly says. 'But that's okay. It gave me more time to get everything ready for you.'
She certainly looks and smells and feels ready to me now.
'You must not tell!' she warns me loudly. 'You must not tell a soul!'
'I won't,' I smoothly promise her.
I'd say anything to get her into her flesh.
'Would you like a drink of water?' she asks, as she had stopped using her naked body to give me my massage.
'No,' I say. 'I'm fine. I just so want to be inside you.'
She giggles at my insouciant behavior. We just sit naked upon her bed and stare at each other’s bodies.
'You will!' she promises through her giggles. 'You will. But not just yet. First, I have a little something extra here for you.'
And with that, she nimbly leaned her body into mine, causing me to fall backwards towards the pillows again. As I place a hand out to brace my fall, she deftly grabs it, and with one of two silk neckerchiefs that she's suddenly produced from somewhere, she quickly ties my wrists together above my head.
Before I can even form the words to my surprise, the last thing my eyes see is her sweet and smiling face, ever so close to mine.
Then she blindfolds me with her second silk neckerchief.
'You mustn't tell a soul!' she reminds me again with great mirth as she disappears from my sight.
Then, she quickly left the bed. As I contemplate removing my bonds, she bounces back upon the mattress with me.
Something that she has now makes a buzzing sound.
Ooh! I need a cold shower!
I certainly hope that helped! That was fun!