i am writing a book these is a little of it, what do you think?

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“The only reason I’m going tonight is cause of you, otherwise there would be no point” said Lilliana into the phone.
“It’s not just because of me”, “if Emilia could make it tonight you wouldn’t be saying silly things like that, you want to go and we both know it” he said listening for her reply but the phone went silent.
“just admit it that you want to go, Plus you’re going with the Redback’s best quarterback slash team captain slash most popular guy in school ME and that my Sweet heart is pretty damn awesome”
Lilliana can imagine the smirk he must have on his face right now; she thought I’m pretty sure his sticking his tongue out on the other side of the phone the thought made her smile.
“okay, okay your right” Lilliana said giving up the fight knowing he was right, she had already bought her dress. she just wished that Emilia was here but she was over in London visiting her sick grammar.
“But I’m not going on a horse”

“Oh come on Lil showing up on a horse will be the bomb” Emmett teased using the nickname he had made for her two days after they met in second grade since then he had always called her that.
“It’ll be so awesome, just say yes Pleaseeeeee come on Lil please, please, please Lilliana” Emmett said in a sooky voice.
Lilliana hated when he did that it made it so hard to say no, well I guess it couldn’t hurt as long as I don’t fall off she thought weary to herself.
“Okay, okay Emmett but if I fall off-”
He cut her off before she could finish her threat.
“YOU WON’T I PROMISE” Emmett shrieked.
Gosh Lilliana thought, he was so excited about this trothiam it was washing off him like a waterfall spraying bits onto her sending little thrills of excitement through her body making Lilliana giggle with small bits of excitement.
Emmett must have noticed her giggling over the phone.
“what are you so giggly about?, ay Lil”
“Just you” Lilliana said smirking.
“I’ll see you in a few hours” Lilliana said.
Hanging up her mobile phone sliding down against the side of her bed onto the floor Lilliana’s head was spinning with all the things she had to do, it was just a dance the school liked to call trothiam which meant goodbye and good luck they throw it every year for the graduating students.
But she only had such little time to get ready, putting all the things she needed to get done into order, she decided what to do first which was defiantly a shower as she touched her tangled knotted hair hanging down around her face reaching her shoulders, only conditioner could be Lilliana’s hero now.
 
This is good very good
And sorry about what I going to say.
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