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i just finished my third poem and please comment?
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<blockquote data-quote="Yujinchan" data-source="post: 1716330" data-attributes="member: 653690"><p>What More Man Wants</p><p></p><p>I walk in a city,</p><p>I saw a flower,</p><p>Trying to survive in this big forest of concrete,</p><p>Why did everybody ignoring this poor little creature.</p><p></p><p>But, I know even me can’t do anything about this.</p><p>All I can do is provide it a little water,</p><p>And watch it.</p><p></p><p>One day, the flower will definitely die,</p><p>Even human can’t survive in this metropolitan city,</p><p>No more to say for this creature,</p><p>Everyday I witnesses pollutions around me,</p><p>I saw technologies around me,</p><p>But, I didn’t saw any nature,</p><p>And now, they want to destroy the other places,</p><p>Why?</p><p></p><p>What more man wants?</p><p>They had successfully destroy the nature,</p><p>The nature that god provided to us,</p><p>It was for our own good,</p><p>What more man wants?</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Yujinchan, post: 1716330, member: 653690"] What More Man Wants I walk in a city, I saw a flower, Trying to survive in this big forest of concrete, Why did everybody ignoring this poor little creature. But, I know even me can’t do anything about this. All I can do is provide it a little water, And watch it. One day, the flower will definitely die, Even human can’t survive in this metropolitan city, No more to say for this creature, Everyday I witnesses pollutions around me, I saw technologies around me, But, I didn’t saw any nature, And now, they want to destroy the other places, Why? What more man wants? They had successfully destroy the nature, The nature that god provided to us, It was for our own good, What more man wants? [/QUOTE]
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