It's far from being done, I was just wondering what others thought. Here is like a little summery, it's what I was thinking of putting on the back of the book but it's kind of long so it would be slightly different anyway here it is:
Isabella Daniels, haunted by an incident from her past involving her two friends, Luke and Ricky Landers, has recently moved to Hyland's capital. Her somewhat normal teen life changed over night when she had two dreams that turned out to be true things that happened. She soon finds out that her and her entire family are have special powers and she becomes enrolled in Willwood Academy, a high school for Guardian teens which is owned by seven immortal Wisemen that are some of the strongest Guardians alive. Ricky also goes to that school and Luke would too, if it was not for the fact he ran away from home months ago and has not been seen since. As time goes on things seem normal, until a group of students go camping in the woods were the Guardians enemies, the Cimmerians, are hiding out. One of the boys the Cimmerians's had kidnapped from Darius's hide-out. He turns out to be Ricky's brother, except he's lying about who he is. Things get even stranger when the king starts to make strange laws, including shutting down Willwood Academy. Isabella, Ricky, Luke, and another student named Drake, get sucked into an ancient war between two powerful sides. The Cimmerians are using the boys they kidnapped to help grow their army and to get power, money, and other things from there family. Isabella also knows a secret about the incident that happened two years before, one that effects Luke and Ricky, and also the Guardians and Cimmerians. Can the four students help save the Guardians and all of Hyland while dealing with problems in all four of their pasts?
If you want to read part of it I have some of it here http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=15132 I have a prologue but I'd rather have you read the 1st chapter (if you read both that would be cool)
So if you can tell me if you'd read/buy it if you saw it at a store or library. If not can you say why so I know? If you read some of it if you could just write like a quick review of what you read that would be great. Thanks in advance!
Isabella Daniels, haunted by an incident from her past involving her two friends, Luke and Ricky Landers, has recently moved to Hyland's capital. Her somewhat normal teen life changed over night when she had two dreams that turned out to be true things that happened. She soon finds out that her and her entire family are have special powers and she becomes enrolled in Willwood Academy, a high school for Guardian teens which is owned by seven immortal Wisemen that are some of the strongest Guardians alive. Ricky also goes to that school and Luke would too, if it was not for the fact he ran away from home months ago and has not been seen since. As time goes on things seem normal, until a group of students go camping in the woods were the Guardians enemies, the Cimmerians, are hiding out. One of the boys the Cimmerians's had kidnapped from Darius's hide-out. He turns out to be Ricky's brother, except he's lying about who he is. Things get even stranger when the king starts to make strange laws, including shutting down Willwood Academy. Isabella, Ricky, Luke, and another student named Drake, get sucked into an ancient war between two powerful sides. The Cimmerians are using the boys they kidnapped to help grow their army and to get power, money, and other things from there family. Isabella also knows a secret about the incident that happened two years before, one that effects Luke and Ricky, and also the Guardians and Cimmerians. Can the four students help save the Guardians and all of Hyland while dealing with problems in all four of their pasts?
If you want to read part of it I have some of it here http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=15132 I have a prologue but I'd rather have you read the 1st chapter (if you read both that would be cool)
So if you can tell me if you'd read/buy it if you saw it at a store or library. If not can you say why so I know? If you read some of it if you could just write like a quick review of what you read that would be great. Thanks in advance!