(jean moved in with jolene and catherine)
Jolene was a pretty 5’3, her hair was straight cut to her shoulders. She was thin and had a slightly curved body. She knew how to make a party fun, Catherine surrounded herself with handsome men and always needed a sexy girl sidekick. She thought Jean was a snob the first time they met, Jean hardly said a word to her but now knows it’ because being shy is part of her personality. After a few days they warmed up to each other and became close friends. She was Catherine’s favorite cousin, they were the same loud, feisty and sometimes sinful. Jean was a shy girl so Jolene’s overly aggressive personality fit in with her just right.
(rewrite it again and u win haha or give me tips)
Jolene was a pretty 5’3, her hair was straight cut to her shoulders. She was thin and had a slightly curved body. She knew how to make a party fun, Catherine surrounded herself with handsome men and always needed a sexy girl sidekick. She thought Jean was a snob the first time they met, Jean hardly said a word to her but now knows it’ because being shy is part of her personality. After a few days they warmed up to each other and became close friends. She was Catherine’s favorite cousin, they were the same loud, feisty and sometimes sinful. Jean was a shy girl so Jolene’s overly aggressive personality fit in with her just right.
(rewrite it again and u win haha or give me tips)