I'm writing a thesis paper on the Aeneid. Which one is better?

abilena13

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Hiya!!
Yeah, so these are the two different thesis sentences. Choose which one is better....and any help is very welcome =D

(1.
Because, in the Aeneid, only men get buried after dying, it is Virgil's opinion that women do not deserve to be buried.

(2.
Although the gods are seen and thought to be extremely powerful and above humans, theirs intentions and plans throughout the poem seem to fail most of the time, thus, showing that humans are sometimes stronger than gods.
 
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