In All Honesty, What Do You Think Of My Singing? (:?

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Hi guyss!! im just looking for some helpful advice on how to become better at what i <3! even if you hate it, please tell me what u think would make it better, all ur feedback is much apprciated believe me!! ) thank you so much in advance

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