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Throughout history, the ability to create and imagine has been one of the most beautiful, and resplendent talents that we practice. We speak in thousands of tongues, build monuments to laud nature's forms of splendor around us, and bury ourselves deep within the fruits of understanding. Yet- one of the most quietly brilliant forms of self- expression that we posses is one that we begin to utilize as infants. We see it every day... be it through the canopies of color that ignite the sky during a sunset, or a particularly appealing arrangement of words describing one. Art is the purest expression of cognition that we can draw on- it can be found in any kind of material, shape, or design without limits.
Anyone can see beauty in what they believe to be sublime, yet, there are very few people that can see the art, and then proclaim what they glimpse to others.

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I am 13, so if you have any tips or suggestions let me know. This is the start of an essay that I am trying to get into AP English with.
 
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