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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Tabatha" data-source="post: 2655595" data-attributes="member: 224697">Amanda stood frozen in horror as she watched the house go up in flame. There was nothing that could be done as she watched everything burn down to the ground. As tears poured down her face, Amanda screamed at the nearest fight fighter "Tell me they're okay, What about Annabelle""I am sorry mam" he replied "but it appears that no one made it out alive". The flames soared up to the sky and it took many men to put it out. What I want to know is this a good beginning to my first book? does it make YOU want to keep reading? any further suggestions?</blockquote>