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<blockquote data-quote="mmm~JaCkI3~mmm" data-source="post: 2032551" data-attributes="member: 734036">Ok, so me and my friend are writing a story and she gave me this description of her character.Name: Melisandra Amaris, known as Ama, Amaris, or MellyDescription: She has dark layered brunette brown hair, flowing a little past mid-back with naturally light brown highlights that sort of looked blond with messy bangs, her eyes were a mixture of gray and green, making her look mysterious. She had a 39-C cup chest and and a round ass, that looked a little fat. She was skinny and thin with a flat toned stomach. Her skin was soft and lightly tan, almost creamy looking. She has long dark lashes and peach colored plump pouty lips.Other things: two tattoos, dimples,she has a calm demeanor, mature for her age,took karate classes for two years,loves sports, is gonna join basketball, scarred by her parents death,calm and laid back personality,a miko, her other power is water, younger than her twin by 3 minutes,sings and dance,good at cooking,good at fixing cars and some other things she told me lol.So does this sound like a Mary Sue? Oh, and she has a beauty mark or birthmark on her eyebrow and upper lip.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="mmm~JaCkI3~mmm, post: 2032551, member: 734036"] Ok, so me and my friend are writing a story and she gave me this description of her character. Name: Melisandra Amaris, known as Ama, Amaris, or Melly Description: She has dark layered brunette brown hair, flowing a little past mid-back with naturally light brown highlights that sort of looked blond with messy bangs, her eyes were a mixture of gray and green, making her look mysterious. She had a 39-C cup chest and and a round ass, that looked a little fat. She was skinny and thin with a flat toned stomach. Her skin was soft and lightly tan, almost creamy looking. She has long dark lashes and peach colored plump pouty lips. Other things: two tattoos, dimples,she has a calm demeanor, mature for her age,took karate classes for two years,loves sports, is gonna join basketball, scarred by her parents death,calm and laid back personality,a miko, her other power is water, younger than her twin by 3 minutes,sings and dance,good at cooking,good at fixing cars and some other things she told me lol. So does this sound like a Mary Sue? Oh, and she has a beauty mark or birthmark on her eyebrow and upper lip. [/QUOTE]

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