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Message: <blockquote data-quote="lilyWhitemmmmm" data-source="post: 2315938" data-attributes="member: 805907"><p>A lot of villains are self-elite, moody jerks.  I'm not saying your villain is no good, but I am a firm believer in "show, don't tell" when it comes to character descriptions.  In other words, his character can't be judged by a biography but rather his actions.  Focus on his acts rather than a description like this.  Sure, I can say my villain's ruthless and vicious, or I can simply explain how she kills the man responsible for her return in a heartbeat.</p></blockquote><p></p>