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Message: <blockquote data-quote="firedup" data-source="post: 2070986" data-attributes="member: 349884"><p>Umm, sorry but no, not really. Maybe if it were in the middle of a really great story surrounding it, but as the first chapter in a book I would set it aside by the time I got through this much of it. I suggest building up the characters first, if we new anything about the people involved this could be good. Your writing style is good you just need something to build on.</p></blockquote><p></p>