is this in any way cliche?

AngelaGrae

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so i was creating an Original Character for Supanova (cuz i'm too poor to buy a cosplay) and my friend suggested i make a story to the character, and i did, i'm planning on posting this story on Wattpad and want to know if its any good/too cliche etc.
(sorry if the summary's crap, i suck at them)

Carolyne is a puppeteer/doll maker who must steal the souls of humans for the person she loves desire. But by day she is merely a student at Dissidia high. No one wants to interact with her until Andy decides to find out why people dont like her. Soon they become friends’ and Carolyne realises that the love she has always known was never love. She believes she can keep this new found love a secret until her master tells her she must kill Andy. Horrified she refuses, but soon realises it isn’t her choice. Carolyne doesn’t want to kill Andy but in the end, just as freedom was in her grasp, she steals his soul and stays bound to her master forever, never to have freedom of choice again.

what do youse think?
 
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