Genre: Sci Fi/Fantasy
Plot: "Years ago, an organization traveled to a new world and began to create an entirely new race. Once they'd finished with this race, they'd begun experimenting upon humans from their former planet. They started to create the Talented, people with extraordinary powers. The Talented, however, were used to keep the organization's leader in power, not for the good of the world. Moreover, the experimentation upon humans continued, and the organization began to kill those who did not become the Talented. Two of these said Talented start a revolt against this organization...." (c)
So on and so forth. At then end the organization is vanquished, blah, blah, blah. Is the idea too cliche? If so, any ideas to change it so that it is NOT cliche? Thanks a lot!
Plot: "Years ago, an organization traveled to a new world and began to create an entirely new race. Once they'd finished with this race, they'd begun experimenting upon humans from their former planet. They started to create the Talented, people with extraordinary powers. The Talented, however, were used to keep the organization's leader in power, not for the good of the world. Moreover, the experimentation upon humans continued, and the organization began to kill those who did not become the Talented. Two of these said Talented start a revolt against this organization...." (c)
So on and so forth. At then end the organization is vanquished, blah, blah, blah. Is the idea too cliche? If so, any ideas to change it so that it is NOT cliche? Thanks a lot!