It is actually a dream. I would like you to tell me everything that is good and bad with this paragraph. Please don't be too harsh even though criticizing is welcome 
The sky was darkening by each tick of a second as if though an eclipse was taking place. The clouds swam into the sky within a blink and the atmosphere seemed to grow cold and ominous. Soon enough everything went black. Bella searched blindly for any sign of life or any object within reach. Nothing touched her hands no matter how thoroughly she searched. Soon Bella started to stress. She could feel her clothing damp with sweat, her palms clammy. Her head was dizzy from the fear that filled her. She fell on her knees and tried to search for the cool touch of the grass but as she swiped at the ground beneath her feet, she felt nothing. All of a sudden she began to feel the terrible sensation of falling. Now there was nothing around Bella but darkness. She opened her mouth to scream yet nothing escaped her lips. This was the worst nightmare Bella had ever experienced. She willed herself to scream yet not a sound was to be heard. Just as she was about to give up, the light returned to the sky and the grass returned beneath her. She hadn’t woken up, but she felt relief to escape the dreadful darkness that had surrounded her. She collapsed on the grass and didn’t open her eyes again, fearing to see nothing but mother black. She did that for the rest of her dream.
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The sky was darkening by each tick of a second as if though an eclipse was taking place. The clouds swam into the sky within a blink and the atmosphere seemed to grow cold and ominous. Soon enough everything went black. Bella searched blindly for any sign of life or any object within reach. Nothing touched her hands no matter how thoroughly she searched. Soon Bella started to stress. She could feel her clothing damp with sweat, her palms clammy. Her head was dizzy from the fear that filled her. She fell on her knees and tried to search for the cool touch of the grass but as she swiped at the ground beneath her feet, she felt nothing. All of a sudden she began to feel the terrible sensation of falling. Now there was nothing around Bella but darkness. She opened her mouth to scream yet nothing escaped her lips. This was the worst nightmare Bella had ever experienced. She willed herself to scream yet not a sound was to be heard. Just as she was about to give up, the light returned to the sky and the grass returned beneath her. She hadn’t woken up, but she felt relief to escape the dreadful darkness that had surrounded her. She collapsed on the grass and didn’t open her eyes again, fearing to see nothing but mother black. She did that for the rest of her dream.
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