Lonny wrote this paragraph. Explain why it is not well developed.
I am enrolled in college for several reasons. First, I want to get an education. An education is important for all Americans. Second, I want to find a good job after college. My last job was at a fast food place, and I hated it. Third, the best place to meet nice girls is in college, and I don't have a girlfriend. For all these reasons, I am in college.
I am enrolled in college for several reasons. First, I want to get an education. An education is important for all Americans. Second, I want to find a good job after college. My last job was at a fast food place, and I hated it. Third, the best place to meet nice girls is in college, and I don't have a girlfriend. For all these reasons, I am in college.