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<blockquote data-quote="LolitaWolf" data-source="post: 2654912" data-attributes="member: 890676">I&#039;ve been making a few characters, and I want to make them believable... But so far, my first character has more flaws than good qualities? I try to balance them out, and make him believable...But ugh, I don&#039;t know.Does he sound believable, or just plain annoying? And how can I balance this out a bit? Personality: He comes across really odd, he&#039;s a bit mischievous, and loves to taunt/tease. He’s pretty laid-back, but still a bit perky. He&#039;s extremely outgoing, and normally very friendly. Though despite being coolly-collected, when he truly snaps, its not a pretty sight. He can be selfish, conceited,&nbsp; and not the most loyal person. He has a very short attention-span, and gets distracted easily. He&#039;s also a tad immature from time to time.&nbsp; He is dangerously clumsy, and normally tries to brush this off, though he gets terribly embarrassed over it. Greatest flaws:&nbsp; He&#039;s selfish, a bit conceited, dangerously clumsy,&nbsp; he’s not very sympathetic , nor compassionate,&nbsp; he’s impatient,&nbsp; and isn’t very loyal.&nbsp; He is often envious of [Character 2] who receives a lot of attention. Best qualities:&nbsp; He’s artistic, normally cheerful, and lots of fun!&nbsp; Despite his major flaws of being un-compassionate, and conceited, he can be very loving, and affectionate to some people. Thanks!Awbzerva -- I know. I&#039;m just writing the basics of his personality, so I, as the writer, can fully know him before I begin to write my story. I plan to let his mischievous and taunting personality show in the story, rather then just pointing out that &#039;He is mischievous&#039;But thanks~</blockquote>

[QUOTE="LolitaWolf, post: 2654912, member: 890676"] I've been making a few characters, and I want to make them believable... But so far, my first character has more flaws than good qualities? I try to balance them out, and make him believable...But ugh, I don't know. Does he sound believable, or just plain annoying? And how can I balance this out a bit? Personality: He comes across really odd, he's a bit mischievous, and loves to taunt/tease. He’s pretty laid-back, but still a bit perky. He's extremely outgoing, and normally very friendly. Though despite being coolly-collected, when he truly snaps, its not a pretty sight. He can be selfish, conceited, and not the most loyal person. He has a very short attention-span, and gets distracted easily. He's also a tad immature from time to time. He is dangerously clumsy, and normally tries to brush this off, though he gets terribly embarrassed over it. Greatest flaws: He's selfish, a bit conceited, dangerously clumsy, he’s not very sympathetic , nor compassionate, he’s impatient, and isn’t very loyal. He is often envious of [Character 2] who receives a lot of attention. Best qualities: He’s artistic, normally cheerful, and lots of fun! Despite his major flaws of being un-compassionate, and conceited, he can be very loving, and affectionate to some people. Thanks! Awbzerva -- I know. I'm just writing the basics of his personality, so I, as the writer, can fully know him before I begin to write my story. I plan to let his mischievous and taunting personality show in the story, rather then just pointing out that 'He is mischievous' But thanks~ [/QUOTE]

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