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My first chapter what do you think?would you read the book?
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<blockquote data-quote="allison" data-source="post: 2431731" data-attributes="member: 215337"><p>Screams of horror filled our little house in the woods. My brother screamed for my to get out, but I couldn't. It was like my feet were glued to the ground where my mothers dead body laid. The thing stood over her eating and rubbing himself in her guts and blood. Landon finally got me to go to the window were I was supposed to climb out right away. Out side bodies were everywhere guts, limbs and bones were scattered around them. I let out a muffled scream as Landon's hand covered my mouth, it reeked of blood and the scent of the monster eating my mother and the rest of the town. He helped me onto the roof then went down first, when I jumped he caught me bridal style and set me down in a pile of guts that he didn't see was there. I began to scream knowing that I was standing in a poor dead humans blood and organs. </p><p></p><p> Landon got me to the car and began to hush me into a sleep, but I stayed awake as he sped away. I stared at a poor child's body being eaten as her hand shook and the life was taken out of her, she let her blood drenched teddy bear go as she reached the last of her life.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="allison, post: 2431731, member: 215337"] Screams of horror filled our little house in the woods. My brother screamed for my to get out, but I couldn't. It was like my feet were glued to the ground where my mothers dead body laid. The thing stood over her eating and rubbing himself in her guts and blood. Landon finally got me to go to the window were I was supposed to climb out right away. Out side bodies were everywhere guts, limbs and bones were scattered around them. I let out a muffled scream as Landon's hand covered my mouth, it reeked of blood and the scent of the monster eating my mother and the rest of the town. He helped me onto the roof then went down first, when I jumped he caught me bridal style and set me down in a pile of guts that he didn't see was there. I began to scream knowing that I was standing in a poor dead humans blood and organs. Landon got me to the car and began to hush me into a sleep, but I stayed awake as he sped away. I stared at a poor child's body being eaten as her hand shook and the life was taken out of her, she let her blood drenched teddy bear go as she reached the last of her life. [/QUOTE]
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