My first ever (proper) quatern lol! Written in response to my previous failed

canibeyourpetm

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attempt? you are telling me i'm pretty
as if i don't already know
as if you'll get something from me
a toy, or strip dance on a pole

take some time to ask yourself why
you are telling me i'm pretty
this act that you want me to buy?
only worthy of my pity

get away from me i'm busy
your kind of creepy can't be taught
you are telling me i'm pretty
and i am telling you you're not

don't be horny, don't be so vile
next time, don't be more than tipsy
don't imagine me naked while
you are telling me i'm pretty


If you're wondering what made me write this, then here's why:

An old man licked his lips lasciviously at my sister while we were both walking down the street
It was the way he did it more than anything else, my skin just wanted to crawl off in a shiver somewhere

Isn't it sad how if a strange ugly person shows you attention, you're immediately creeped out but if a pretty stranger did you wouldn't mind at all?

PS. Thanks again to Nancy, Peter and Neonman for all their advice on form.
 
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