It was exactly three years since Jean paid her last respects to her late Grandfather. Every time she thought of the Philippines, she remembered her grandfather’s death pulling her back into depression. But this time she swore to herself it would be different, that she would enjoy herself. After all the pain she had suffered through, a ray of happiness from the sun from Philippines might make the darkness disappear.
(rewrite this and win) or give me tips
(rewrite this and win) or give me tips